Ivy League Admission Essays
For the entering class of 2013, admission to Ivy League universities will be more competitive than ever. Top schools will likely reject 80-90% of all candidates, including many with perfect grade point averages and test scores. How do they decide who gets in? Many applicants would kill to know the admissions "secret," the competitive edge that can help them gain acceptance.
In such a talented pool of applicants, exceptional writing (in a persuasive, well-conceived essay), augmented by credible third-party reference letters, often makes the difference between acceptance and rejection. Surprisingly, few applicants realize the importance of these factors in the evaluation process. Rather than write a compellling personal statement, they simply rehash their achievements in a boring, laundry-list style, leaving the impression that they are dull academic machines. Others don't know what the committee is seeking, so they decide to "play it safe" by submitting a generic essay that could have been written by anyone. Sadly, these half-hearted efforts rarely open the coveted Ivy League doors.
Fortunately, we can help. IvyLeagueAdmission.com was created by a team of Ivy League graduates who have served on over seventy admission committees for law school, medical school, business school and undergraduate programs. Through this experience, we have acquired a thorough understanding of the selection process and the challenges that candidates face to compete in such an exceptional pool of applicants.
Our mission is to offer specific guidance to medical school, business school, law school and undergraduate candidates on all aspects of the admissions process. We understand the factors that influence the critical acceptance/rejection decision, including the importance of the admissions essays and reference letters. We also know the most common (and preventable) mistakes that will ruin an applicant's chances.
We created IvyLeagueAdmission.com as a courteous, efficient, cost-effective resource for clients who want to submit an exceptional application to the nation's top programs. The lifelong benefits of an Ivy League education are enormous; let us help you attain your professional and educational dreams!
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1. Essay Writing Tips & Strategies
In a typical day, an admissions officer will read between 20 and 50 application essays from candidates around the globe. Amazingly, few applicants will write anything convincing or memorable enough to stand out from the crowd. Despite their best efforts, they miss a golden opportuntiy to sell themselves.
From the committee's perspective, what makes a positive impression? We surveyed thirty admission officers on what they expect to see in application essays and personal statements for medical school, law school, business school and undergraduate studies. Use their comprehensive feedback (provided absolutely free) to guide your own original writing.
2. Editing Service for Application Essays
We are proud to offer a professional, top-notch editing service for application essays and personal statements. Our editors are all Ivy League graduates with extensive experience in our respective fields. We've served on admissions committees and have a firm grasp on the level of writing talent that is expected for each program.
Our service provides critical guidance on voice, content, language, effectiveness, grammar and mechanics. In addition to "fixing" any inherent flaws, we'll let you know whether your essays are colorful enough to grab the committee's attention and memorable enough to capture their vote.
3. Writing Service for Application Essays
We also offer a comprehensive, start-to-finish writing service for candidates who prefer to have us write their essays for them. This service is an excellent choice for applicants who, for a variety of reasons, are unable to transform their own experiences into compelling essays that will succeed at the Ivy League level.
4. Packages of Successful Ivy League Admission Essays
We believe that actual application essays from accepted Ivy League students are an invaluable resource for you in the writing process. Through our work in admissions, we have compiled an impressive library of them for resale. They offer an excellent perspective of the writing talent that is expected at specific schools, and show how each candidate successfully answered difficult questions. They make excellent models for your own original writing.
We offer packages of admission essays for undergraduates, law, medical and business students. Each essay was written (and accepted) within the past two years and is available only through Ivy League Admission. Our order forms detail the specific packages that are available.
5. Writing Service for Reference / Recommendation Letters
In many cases, a candidate's emotional and interpersonal strengths can only be validated by a compelling third-party who has supervised him/her in a professional or academic capacity. Unfortunately, the writers of most reference letters do not know what the committee needs to hear to make an informed admissions decision. Sadly, most letters we see are are too short and vague to excite or persuade the reader.
We are proud to offer a professional, top-notch writing service for reference letters for business school, law school and medical school applicants. Our writers are all Ivy League graduates with admissions experience in our respective fields. We will draft a compelling letter for you that conveys the maturity, tenacity and professionalism that the committee expects at this level of competition.
6. Packages of Successful Reference Letters for Ivy League Candidates
Over the years, we have assembled a unique compilation of reference letters that opened the door for candidates who applied to highly competitive programs in medicine, law and business. Unlike the short, generic notes that we usually see, these letters eloquently document the candidate's strengths in the proper perspective, tone and level of detail. Whether you are writing a letter for a talented student or colleague or have been asked to write your OWN letter, these successful examples are mandatory reading.
7. Comprehensive Admissions Guides
We have published comprehensive guides to enable potential students (undergraduate, medical school, business school and law school) to better approach the Ivy League admissions process. Each guide contains invaluable details about getting accepted, including interview tips, the importnace of work experience and outside activities, mitigating factors and the mathematial formulas used to screen and rank applicants. Gain the benefits of a professional admissions coach at a tiny fraction of the cost.
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Each month, we receive hundreds of inquiries about the importance of standardized test scores in Ivy League admission. Just how important is that one-day test in determining whether you'll be accepted? From our experience, at most highly selective schools, your standardized test scores are more critical than your GPA in determining your admissions chances. You will not be a competitive candidate at the Ivy League unless you ace your entrance exam.
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What the Admissions Committee Seeks
Law school applicants are required to submit a personal statement that incorporates three themes:
a) why you want to be an attorney
b) how you are unique from other applicants
c) your qualifications and experience
The essay must also accomplish a fourth objective, which is to demonstrate that you possess both the hard (technical) and soft (interpersonal) skills required in the legal profession. Not an easy task!
Competition is fierce for law school admission, particularly in the prestigious Ivy League programs. Your personal statement carries more weight in the admissions process than you may realize. Perfect grade point averages and LSAT scores are expected at this level, as are maturity and excellent communication skills. Your best chance to stand out from the crowd is to convey the exceptional personal attributes of an effective, ethical attorney. Ironically, applicants often minimize the importance of the essay, reference letters and the personal interview, yet they are your best opportunities to demonstrate your strengths outside the classroom.
Admissions officers seek the following traits in law school applicants:
| honesty | creativity | passion |
| logical thinking | independence | confidence |
| humor | perseverance | communication skills |
| objectivity | maturity | strong personal ethics |
We strongly recommend that you avoid four common pitfalls:
a) Hard luck stories, unless they explain your professional commitment
b) Manipulative or argumentative essays on controversial issues
c) Technical essays that don't reveal your personal side
d) Long, non-persuasive essays on specific legal cases
In our admissions work, we frequently see well-intentioned essays fall flat because they don't capture the reader's interest and convey the writer's true personality. Far too often, the essays simply reiterate material that is presented elsewhere in the application, which wastes a golden opportunity to present a new side of yourself.
Don't underestimate the committee's interest in your maturity and interpersonal strengths (or lack of them). Due to the high ethical standards and level of critical thinking expected in the legal profession, your character and motivation will be highly scrutinized during the law school admission process. Use the essay set to sell your whole self, not just the individual pieces that you think they want to see.
Writing Tips
In a typical day, a law school admissions officer will read between 25 and 50 application essays from candidates around the world. What stands out and makes a positive impression? Contrary to popular opinion, it's not simply academic prowess. Indeed, many candidates with exceptional grades are rejected each year. For most competitive applicants, the key to admissions success is selling your unique (non-academic) strengths.
Before you write, consider your audience and their objective. Committee members are vibrant people with unique personalities and talents. Their goal is to select a class of diverse, passionate students who will best contribute to the class. The ultimate class roster will include talented athletes, musicians, scientists and poets. No two successful candidates are alike, nor are their essays. A "great essay" can be about football, a dance recital, a family vacation or an embarrassing moment. What's the common denominator? Your writing must reveal your true personality, whatever that may be. Show us who you are and what you will bring to our program. Show us the contribution that only you can make.
Are there specific guidelines to follow? Absolutely! We surveyed thirty admission officers on what they expect to see in college application essays. Here's what works:
1. Answer the question that was asked. Many candidates try to dodge tough questions, particularly those about ethical issues, personal weaknesses and failure. Yet the committee asks these questions for a reason. We want to understand how you respond to adversity and the specific insights you developed from those experiences. Answer the tough questions honestly and directly. Don't try to sell us the artificial "canned" response you think we want to hear.
2. Write naturally, but concisely. Use simple sentence structure and your normal everyday vocabulary. Don't waste time on fancy introductions; get to the point quickly and reinforce it with specific examples.
3. Use excellent grammar and punctuation. Use logical paragraph breaks to separate your thoughts and to make the essay easier to read. Proofread your work carefully before sending it in. Don't let simple carelessness ruin your chances.
4. Show your real personality (let us get to know you). Too many essays are long, boring theoretical pieces about politics, the economy or complex business issues. No matter how well-written or researched, they don't tell us a darn thing about the candidate. Anyone can write a rational, detached paper, but that's not what we are looking for. We want to get to know you and the unique contribution you will make to our school.
5. Personalize your essay as much as possible. Write about your own unique, funny, interesting experiences. Provide details to add color. Adopt a relaxed, conversational style.
6. Use humor only if it works. Few people can write humorous prose or recount funny experiences effectively. If you have this gift, by all means use it. Before sending us a "funny" essay, have several different people read your material to make sure it comes across well on paper. Avoid anything off-color or mean-spirited.
7. Convey a positive message (avoid cynicism). Many applicants choose to discuss a misfortune they have experienced and how it shaped their personality. Be very careful of your tone if you decide to write about a hard-luck story. Avoid the "victimization" perspective and focus on how you overcame the situation. Show us how the experience helped you to demonstrate your stamina, perseverance and intelligence. If written well, these essays show us that you can succeed in the face of terrible obstacles. If written badly, you may sound plaintive, self-righteous and bitter.
8. Write about topics you are passionate about. Nothing lifts an essay off the page more than genuine enthusiasm! Yet few candidates have the confidence to write about a passion if they feel it is silly or frivolous. Questions about your favorite hobby or childhood memory are designed to flesh out your non-academic side. Yes, we really want to know! Nothing is more precious than your unique memories about key people and experiences in your life. We've read magical essays about eating ice cream and singing in the shower and absolutely dreadul ones about triglyceride synthesis. When choosing your topics, pick what genuinely excites you. Your enthusiasm will show in the final product.
9. Use the active voice. Nothing is more tedious than trying to read an essay written in the cold, detached passive voice. While popular with scientists who publish in technical journals, it is pretentious and verbose in everyday writing. Keep your verbs simple and active. What's the difference?
Active Voice: The cow jumped over the moon.
Passive Voice: The moon was jumped over by the cow.
Yes, it sounds that silly when you use it, too!
10. Explain events whenever appropriate. Many of your accomplishments are of interest to the committee because of why you tackled them, what you thought about them and what you learned. Tell us the reasoning behind your decision and how your life changed as a result of the experience.
11. Be specific and focused. Rather than listing several items or events, give a full description of just one. The more details you include, the more personal your essay will be.
12. Proofread several times and get feedback from valued sources. Explain to them what you hope to convey in your writing and ask whether you met your objectives. The true test of your writing isn't what you intended to say, but what the reader actually understands.
13. Revise and polish until it is perfect. Give yourself enough time to do the essays well. Successful applicants usually invest several hours considering each question, deciding the correct approach, constructing an outline and writing a first draft. You may have to write and revise multiple drafts before you are satisfied with your essay.
In addition, they advise all applicants to avoid the following common mistakes:
1. Don't let anyone else tell you what to write. Well-meaning parents and advisors often interfere in the writing process, sabotaging the candidate's chances. Use your own best judgement in choosing a topic and writing your essay. Don't let anyone else influence you. We read thousands of essays each year, and have developed a keen eye for authenticity.
2. Don't oversell yourself or try too hard. Many candidates manage to squeeze every accomplishment they've ever had into a single one-page essay. Others explain emphatically how much they "really, really" want to attend our school. Don't take such a desperate approach. Answer the questions to the best of your ability and be yourself.
3. Don't rehash information that can be found elsewhere in the application. We already know your grade point average, standardized test scores, academic awards and honors. Use your limited essay space to discuss experiences that aren't revealed anywhere else. Consider your essay to be an informal interview, your exclusive "one-on-one" time with the committee. Show us why we should accept you into our academic community.
4. Don't write a scholarly or overly academic paper. The essay is your opportunity to demonstrate your non-academic strengths, particularly your personality. Don't waste the opportunity to let us get to know the real you.
5. Don't appear overly idealistic or preachy. Don't use trite, tired themes for the focus of the essay. Be original. Each year, we receive hundreds of essays that discuss the horrors of nuclear weapons and the dangers of global warming. Sadly, they don't tell us anything we don't already know. If you choose to discuss a meaningful issue, do so in the context of your demonstrated commitment to change it, either through your career or volunteer work. Don't confuse passive idealism (or future intentions) with productive action. A demonstrated commitment to a cause is worth writing about; passive idealism is not.
6. Don't try to explain blemishes on your record. With rare exceptions, it is impossible to explain poor grades and test scores without sounding irresponsible or defensive. Neither will enhance your admissions chances. If you have a compelling excuse for an academic disappointment, place it in a separate addendum to your file, rather than in the body of an essay or personal statement.
7. Don't use large, pretentious words. Use the simplest possible language to explain your meaning precisely. Using three-dollar words to impress the committee usually backfires, as it comes across as presumptuous and arrogant.
8. Don't be boring and safe; tell a real story! A fresh and well-written essay will enhance your credentials and aid your application effort.
9. Don't lie or exaggerate. Applicants seldom realize how easy it is to detect lies and half-truths in admissions essays. Don't pretend to be someone you are not. After reading your file, committee members have an excellent "feel" for your character and can tell when a reported event or achievement isn't consistent with the rest of your history. Lying is a fatal mistake. A single misrepresentation on your application will lead us to doubt all of your other assertions.
10. Don't be gimmicky. Avoid using definitions to begin your essay. This crutch was extremely popular in the late 90's, but is now synonymous with sloppy writing. Avoid using cute or "meaningful" quotations, unless they perfectly fit the character and tone of your essay. Quotations are terrific if they are seldom-quoted and deeply relevant to your chosen topic. All too often, though, their usage is cliche and the resulting essay is unimaginative.
11. Don't play games with the word limit. Don't use a miniscule type size or invisible border to shrink an essay to the stipulated length. Except in extreme circumstances, your finished essay should adhere to the maximum word limit. In many cases, less is more. Convery your points quickly and efficiently; don't feel obligated to "fill" extra space.
The biggest mistake applicants make is trying too hard. Most essays are long, boring laundry lists of achievements that are already presented elsewhere in the application. Ironically, unsuccessful candidates rarely reveal enough about themselves for the reader to get to know them. Rather than reveal their unique personality, many try to impress the committee with their youthful idealism and good intentions. They write a long, boring piece about the need to promote world peace or end hunger. Sadly, these preachy "Miss America"-type essays are rarely successful.
The essays of successful applicants will probably surprise you. They are seldom academic in nature, and may seem risky (or frivolous) to those who are diligently trying to put their best foot forward. That's why studying them is so valuable. They reveal the heart and soul of each writer and demonstrate what the candidate would add to the university. They were accepted because they caught the eye (and captured the heart) of a receptive admissions officer.
We offer a variety of products and services to help you produce a memorable personal statement that will impress even seasoned admission committee members:
1. We have compiled some of the best, most diverse packages of personal statements for Ivy League law schools in the world. Use them to gain insight into your own life experiences and write your own compelling essays.
2. We also offer professional editing services and writing services for law school candidates. Gain the competitive edge and win the coveted Ivy League spot you deserve!
We are proud to offer a professional, top-notch editing service for all Ivy League application essays. Our editors are all Ivy League graduates with extensive experience in our respective fields. We've served on admissions committees and have a firm grasp on the level of writingtalent that is expected for each professional program.
Our editors provide the following services:
1. Evaluation of your essay's content. We improve the coherency of your essay to demonstrate your unique characteristics and potential for success. We edit your work to give the admissions committee a multi-dimensional perspective of your achievements and personality. We ensure that the content of your essay improves your chances of admission by emphasizing the attributes coveted by your specific school. We focus each essay to directly answer the question and to flow naturally in an easily-readable style.
2. Providing your essay with a compelling, memorable voice. Admissions officers frequently read over 50 essays per day, many of which sound exactly alike. With over 100 qualified candidates for every seat in the class, you must capture their attention from the very first word you write. Your essays must be memorable narratives with vivid, compelling language and a strong voice. We ensure that your introduction immediately engages the reader and provides a good first impression. We will ensure that your content provides details of your life that are not contained elsewhere in your application. We also edit your conclusion to establish a sense of closure and balance in your essay.
3. Capturing the optimal tone for the essay. Great editing strengthens your voice and presents the best possible aspects of your personality. Our editors will enhance your natural writing style to reflect the confidence and charisma of a successful Ivy League applicant. We ensure that your tone is positive without being boastful, and that you are perceived as confident rather than arrogant.
4. Improving the essay's structure, flow and readability. Great essays are flawless and on topic. We restructure awkward sentences and omit any unnecessary words, phrases, sentences or paragraphs. We also ensure that your essay is cohesive and leads the reader to a strong conclusion. We vary your sentence structure and insert appropriate transitions to improve the logical flow of your writing. We verify that your paragraphs signal natural breaks in your thought process and that each is cohesive in its own right. We clarify topic sentences and emphasize supporting details.
5. Editing all grammatical and mechanical mistakes. We will correct all grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, run-on sentences and fragments. We also correct word choice errors, catching subtle mistakes like improper use of prepositions and pronouns.
6. Coordination of multiple essays. Some programs require applicants to write several essays on a variety of topics. We ensure that each essay presents a different but consistent image of your personality and strengths. A well-coordinated essay set has a synergistic effect on the admissions committee: it provides a 360-degree view of the candidate on both a professional and personal level.
7. Comparison to other applicants. Along with our editing services, we will also offer our critical perspective of your essay and compare it to others we have evaluated. We will provide advice to make your essays personal, enlightening and memorable for the reader. We will also suggest further content improvements and rate the essay’s overall effectiveness. Our goal is to make you stand out from the crowd and pass that all-important final cut!
Ordering:
All essays should be sent to us electronically, either as email attachments or pasted directly into the body of the message. We will complete our work and return our first revision to you within 48 hours of receiving your document. We offer this fast turnaround time 24 hours a day, 7 days a week, 365 days a year. After reviewing our initial revisions, we are happy to accommodate any changes or additions you wish to make. We provide a second review of the work at no additional charge.
Pricing:
We charge $75 for a three page essay (750 words) and $15 for each additional page (250 words / page).
When submitting an essay for editing, please provide the following information:
1. the essay question being asked
2. the word limit, if any
3. your initial draft
4. concepts and ideas you want to include or emphasize
5. time constraints
6. any other information you consider relevant
We are confident that we can edit your work into its most inspirational, compelling form!
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